Shawn,Leo,Lucus and Crystal finish Freddy vs Jason and Leo flicks the lights on."That was so bad" Crystal said.All the boys complain to her about how it's not a bad film."What about Alien vs Predator?" Lucus asks."I didn't mind the first one,the second one was cheesy" Crystal said."What!" Shawn said."I need to use the bathroom,Shawn" Crystal said and walked out of the living room.Suddenly Shawn got a text.He reached it out of his pocket and the name read "Unknown".He opened the message:
"Who should I kill Shawn? Crystal or Scarlet?"
"Woah Shawn...are you okay? You look like you've seen a ghost" Leo said."Uh,yeah...I'm fine" Shawn said.He texted back:
"Neither"
Almost instantly,a new message was sent:
"Fine,I'll choose myself!"
"Oh shit...CRYSTAL!" Shawn yelled and ran down the hallway to hear Crystal screaming in terror.Leo and Lucus quickly followed Shawn to see Crystal standing on a chair."What is it? Are you okay?" Shawn said."NO THERES A RAT!" Crystal said as a small rat ran across the room and out the door."Seriously Crystal,I just got a text saying you or Scarlet are going to die!" Shawn said."What?" Leo replied."Shawn,we gotta get Scarlet NOW!" Crystal said."It's night and she's driving,the killer might make her cause an accident or something!" Lucus said."Shit we gotta go get her!" Shawn said.
"Whore...Anger Issues...Asian Beta...and Black girl.You four wish to become a Heather..well it's not that easy.This hazing is possibly one of the worst but also one of the funniest...for me to watch you suffer.You four are gonna strip down and jump in the pool,which is filled with a certain powder.Last one to get out,wins.Everyone,DO IT SLUTS!" Heather ordered to Cara,Scarlet,Leila and Jocelyn as they stood outside.Jenna and Koromie stood beside Heather.
The girls did as they were told and all jumped in the pool at the same time,and within seconds they all knew what powder Heather was talking about...itching powder."AAAHH MY EYES IT BURNS!" Leila screamed in horror."It's not like you could really see out of them anyway" Heather said,which Koromie glared at Heather for.
After 3 minutes,everyone was still in the pool."I'm going to get some drinks,come with me Number 2 and 3" Heather said and the girls walked off,leaving the girls in the pool alone."Scarlet look out!" Jocelyn said as she turned and Ghostface had a knife on the side of the pool and stabbed her in the shoulder repeatably...Scarlet sunk to the bottom of the pool feeling weak."Oh my god we need to help her!" Cara said."We can't leave the pool the killers right here!" Leila said.
"FINE ILL FUCKING HELP HER!" Jocelyn snapped and dived under and grabbed her arm and pulled her up.But she looked around and Leila and Cara were both quickly getting out of the pool.She looked up to see why,still underwater,and saw the pool cover was going to trap both girls underwater and she dived up without Scarlet and got out just as it was closing."She's still underwater!" Cara said.Jocelyn looked around,Ghostface was gone."Quick the switch for the pool cover!" Leila said and ran over to a machine and switched it.Suddenly the pool covering was being wrapped up and slowly the girls could see Scarlet's floating body,face down.Leila watched the switch while the blood spread in the pool as the water turned red.Jocelyn went to pull Scarlet up while Cara ran inside to tell the Heather's of the attack.Jocelyn lay Scarlet on the concrete next to the pool.Cara and the Heather's came out of her house."WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED HERE? WHO GOT ATTACKED? WHY THE FUCK DID ONE OF YOU HOES FUCKING HAD THEIR PERIOD IN THE POOL!" Heather screamed and saw Scarlet's body."Oh no....what a tragedy.Ugh could she fucking die somewhere else,like someone else's place?" Heather said.
"SCARLET!" Shawn yelled as he,Leo,Lucus and Crystal ran around the side of the house.They all saw Scarlet laying motionless on the ground,bleeding from her shoulder."Scarlet no!" Shawn said,his tears in his eyes.Leo and Lucus were in shock,and Crystal just got angry."Did anyone see the killer run off?" she snapped.Jocelyn,Leila and Cara shook their heads."Ugh..well then,did anyone actually try and preform CPR?" she snapped again."Um I'm sorry Crystal but I'm pretty sure none of us are professional lifeguards!" Heather snapped back.
"We have to call the police!" Leo said."Duh the killer is gone,probs to kill other people that aren't here,so your all safe with me" Heather said."Excuse me but didn't Justin,Scarlet AND Mia die here like not long ago?" Lucus asked."Yeah but they were by themselves,lone wolfs are picked off one by one,you need to stay in a pack" Jenna said."Um...Scarlet was like RIGHT BESIDE US?" Leila exclaimed."I don't care about her she was a raging beast who got what she deserved" Heather said."You BITCH!" Crystal said and bitchslapped Heather so hard that Heather fell onto the ground."aaaahhh KILL THE SLUT!" Heather screamed.Jenna and Koromie started walking towards Crystal with intimidating looks on their faces."No one hurts the queen!" Jenna said."You'll regret doing that Crystal!" Koromie warned."Woah woah stop it!" Cara said as she,Leila and Jocelyn held the girls back.
"We have to go they'll go ape on you Crystal!" Shawn said."Let's go" Crystal said,in a pissed mood.Shawn led Leo,Lucus,Crystal,Leila,Cara and Jocelyn out of Heather's place and they all went to Shawn's place to process everything that just happened."I still actually believe she's dead!" Shawn said."I'm gonna go now,I'll be safe with Ben" Cara said."I'll wait with you outside,make sure your safe" Leila said and the pair walked outside as Cara speed-dialled Ben.
Brian was sitting at home,watching the latest episode of The 100."No! Why did my favourite character have to die! FUCK!" Brian said and punched the wall in a rage.Suddenly he got a text from Noah:
"Hey 'babe' what's this?"
*Noah sent a screenshot from Bradley's snapchat saying "Brian knows how to use that mouth!"*
"Are you cheating on me? How could you do this to me?"
Brian froze."Shit...uhhhh"
"Babe what are you talking about,Bradley knows more than one Brian? He didn't fuck me!"
Brian waited a few seconds before Noah started typing
"Then why did you and him leave Heather's place together?"
"Yeah we left but he said he was going to fuck Brian and I got confused so I said me and he's like nah a different one.I didn't fuck him Noah I only love you!" Brian lied.
Brian then received another text from someone else
"Boyfriend troubles are we?"
"Yeah,how did you know?"
"I have my ways.You need to end it for one.PERMANENTLY!"
"Ugh fine,I'll end the love triangle"
"Good boy.Thanks for picking off Dylan.Don't worry about the bodies I'll take care of them."
"Okay...by morning the love triangle will be no more"
Brian sighed and Noah texted back.
"Im sorry for acting suspicious I just really love you"
"I love you too.Its ok to be a little suspicious but there is no need"
"Okay.Night babe"
"Night XOXO"
Brian lay on his bed as the credits rolled."Fine I'll end the fucking triangle....but who?"
Ben and Cara were at Ben's place."I feel bad for Tony,im gonna give him a call" Cara said."Fine,but be quick,you still haven't fully explained what happened with Heather tonight" Ben said.Cara called Tony,but he just ignored her."He won't pick up" Cara said."My turn" Ben said and dialled.Tony picked up to say "Fuck off" and hang up."I do feel bad for him,I really do but I loved you more,I just didn't want him to know" Cara said."It's okay" Ben said.Ben was lying on his bed and Cara walked up to him and straddled him."I think it'll be better if we weren't wearing clothes" Ben said.Cara grinned at him before reaching for her bra strap but a window smashed from the living room."What was that?" Cara said,frightened....
Tony was on his bed in the dark,trying to fall asleep.But he couldn't,whenever he closed his eyes he'd just remember Cara and all the memories they spent together.She was so kind and sweet and sexy,she was perfect.Now she's with his douche of a friend Ben.The phone ran for a third time."What the fuck is it this time!" Tony said and pressed accept call.
"TONY THE KILLER IS IN BEN'S HOUSE WE HEED HELP!"
"Ha.ha.I know what you're trying to do.Make me go over there so you can apologise.Fuck you Cara!"
"IM FUCKING SERIOUS....im hiding from the killer.I don't know where Ben is!"
Tony listened carefully and could hear footsteps,and Cara's breath was getting heavier.
"Call.The.Police" Cara said and hung up.She was hiding in the closet in Ben's room while Ben was in his on-suite.She focused on her breathing but the footsteps grew louder.The closet door swung open in an instant and there stood the killer.She screamed at the mask of white with black on the eyes and mouth."DON'T TOUCH HER!" Ben's voice said from the on-suite.Ghostface turned his head to the on-suite before grabbing Cara's face and slamming it against the closet wall and shutting the closet door and tying the two handles with zip ties.
Tony got a video call from an unknown phone.He pressed accept.
Tony saw the closet door with zip ties and it was moving."What the fuck?" Tony said."SOMEONE HELP ME! BEN! TONY!" Cara called out from inside the closet."Holy shit!" Tony said.The camera was moving and it was showing Ghostface's mask."You really should of called the cops.But NOW if you do Cara will die" Ghostface said."You psychotic bitch!" Tony said.Ghostface walked into the on-suite to see Ben holding a container of hot water."Come one step closer and this will burn your face!" Ben said.Ghostface took a big step,and Ben threw the water and container at Ghostface.The water started to make the phone glitchy and the video call got cancelled.
"No no no no no no no no no no this can't be happening!" Tony said to himself.He tried to redial but it kept cancelling.Suddenly Ghostface sent Tony a picture.He opened it to see Ben in his bathtub with his intestines hanging out and blood all over the clean white walls.Then under it was the words "#NoFilter".
Tony gasped and then vomited at the sight of the intestines.Then another picture with the closet door open and Cara lying on the ground.Then under that was "I'll let the bitch live.Thanks for playing the game properly.If you wanna get over Cara,give me a call :*".Tony looked at the words and got very creeped out.
"Ladies.I need a break from all the killings.I also need a break from Crystal being a huge cunt-slut so I've decided...to take a trip to my uncles cabin in the woods" Heather said."Who's your uncle?" Koromie asked."Uncle Ash,I think his name is Williams or something.Anyway,with us all safe we can properly discuss who should replace Mia because her ass is dead and whenever we do a hazing the killer goes and kills off the pledges!" Heather explained.
"Why don't we take the pledges with us so we can bond with them and see who's the least annoying?" Jenna asked."That's...not actually a shit idea.Good job Jenna" Heather said."Let's add a few others,to make the vaca a little bit better" Heather said and invited Brian,Noah,Bradley,Quinton,Ben and Tony."I can't get Ben,Tony or Cara's cells to work" Heather said."Knowing those irrelevant whores they are probs in the middle of a 3way" Jenna said.
Shawn,Leo,Lucus and Crystal said goodbye to Leila and Jocelyn as the went home to pack for the camping trip with the Heather's.Shawn walked inside his house and Leo and Lucus followed him."Wait up!" Crystal said.Suddenly a metal baseball bat smacked her from the back of the head and her limp yet alive body being thrown into a van and driven away.Leo popped his head outside....."Crystal?" he asked the empty and dark night,with Crystal no where to be seen.
Episode Five:Country Killings
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Questions:
Thoughts on the episode?
Favourite characters?
Where is Crystal? Will she die?
How will Ghostface punish Brian?
Will someone die at the cabin or in town?
Did you get the easter egg reference Heather said?
Opinion on death scenes?
Tips/Things I could improve on?
I saw this coming before I read it, I was recurring, and I was obviously going to a dangerous situation.
I have a few thoughts
When I died "oh fudge"!
When Heather basically didn't care that I died "You bitch"!
When they left without calling the police or at least do something "So you decide to leave me here, jokes on you, by the end of the week, I'll have a good tan".
When Brian said his favorite character died "I think everyone's favorite character died (not on 100, this episode)".
I have a suggestion, it seems like you're not giving the recurring characters any character, it doesn't seem they have personality. Macda27
Questions:
Thoughts on the episode? Fine, I guess.
Favourite characters? Jocelyn and Cara
Where is Crystal? Will she die? Don't know, Don't care.
How will Ghostface punish Brian? Hang him upside down and cut him slowly until he bleeds to death.
Will someone die at the cabin or in town? Both
Did you get the easter egg reference Heather said? No
Opinion on death scenes? My character was badass trying to help < 3
Tips/Things I could improve on? I'm not black. I think it's very racist that you would think someone named "Jocelyn" is black. She is a white bitch, okay.
