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I AM...

Mar 14, 2012 by SpellCaster0312
Ok so...
I did this poem as a school assignment and everyone was telling me how it was really good including my teacher.
I want you guys to read and give me YOUR feedback.
I'm sorry, I'm weird like that. I want to know what people I don't know think about my work... :3
Ok here goes:

I am a scientist who lives astronomy.
I wonder if parallel dimensions exist.
I Hear the roaring of the rocket as it is launched into space
I see the twinkling stars around me
I want to go into space one day
I am a scientist who loves astronomy

I imagine myself exploring the galaxy
I feel my pulse racing when I think about the fabric if space
I touch the cold steel to the old space shuttle
I worry that I might get hurt when I go into space
I cry when people die in space
I am a scientist who lives astronomy

I understand I may never be able to go into the universe.
I say if you follow you follow your dreams you can do anything
I dream about the vacuum of space
I try to do the very best I can
I hope to go into space one day
I am a scientist who loves astronomy

I didn't remember every line so 2 or 3 I just now made up.
So... Yeah! Tell me what you think!!

Comments

OMG I DID THAT PROJECT BACK IN 7TH GRADE. LOL
Sent by saxonmath,Mar 14, 2012

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