Ok so...
I did this poem as a school assignment and everyone was telling me how it was really good including my teacher.
I want you guys to read and give me YOUR feedback.
I'm sorry, I'm weird like that. I want to know what people I don't know think about my work... :3
Ok here goes:
I am a scientist who lives astronomy.
I wonder if parallel dimensions exist.
I Hear the roaring of the rocket as it is launched into space
I see the twinkling stars around me
I want to go into space one day
I am a scientist who loves astronomy
I imagine myself exploring the galaxy
I feel my pulse racing when I think about the fabric if space
I touch the cold steel to the old space shuttle
I worry that I might get hurt when I go into space
I cry when people die in space
I am a scientist who lives astronomy
I understand I may never be able to go into the universe.
I say if you follow you follow your dreams you can do anything
I dream about the vacuum of space
I try to do the very best I can
I hope to go into space one day
I am a scientist who loves astronomy
I didn't remember every line so 2 or 3 I just now made up.
So... Yeah! Tell me what you think!!