learn to pronounce schedule
make your videos shorter bc no one's got time to spend 12 min watch an introduction video
other than that, first 2 min i watched were ok :)
^That's a joke, but in honest criticism, there's about a 1,000,000,000 people doing the exact same kinda gimmick, I didn't really see anything that would make me choose to watch you as opposed to them, ya know?
You need better lighting and a camera with the ability to focus on you. Those things do cost money though, so I get why you wouldn't automatically have lighting and an expensive camera.
Same thing as the people above, don't do the same gimmicks as everyone else! Make your channel unique
I felt like after awhile you and/or the content got boring. Maybe the video was too long or idk cause i dont make videos, but maybe you'll find use out of this comment idk
I am going to give you some advice from a vlog watcher.
1. Make sure to make your videos stand out from everyone else's :P
( like get a special theme to your channel. If you like to make videos about dogs, then make videos about dog each week. It will start you a fanbase. )
2. Try to keep your vlogs around 4- 5 minutes. To make sure to keep everyone's attention :)
3. Post your videos on social media sites like Twitter, Instagram, Facebook, etc to expand your popularity.
Pros of this video:
Good Personality
Good Editing
Good- Looking ( avoid the haters talking about your acne. Acne can be cured! :) )
You have an accent which a lot of female users find attractive. (Big fan-base)
Cons of this video:
A little too long (keep between 4-5 mins)
For future videos make a clear theme for your channel to make it stand out.
( I know this is your intro video, so it's fine)
omg the audio is killing me :s
if this isn't filmed w/ your phone, then please use your phone opposed to this
also make the video like 3 - 6 min long
also the background music is SO generic and i've heard it on every other youtubers channel
Firstly I think it's great you're starting a channel, takes a lot of guts. I agree with the criticism of the video being too long, quality over quantity any day and perhaps better lighting will help keep the viewers engaged.
