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Big Brother and online Hunger games.

Murder In Small Town X

May 9, 2009 by Kizza
imageIn most houses the family pet had managed to score a spot   at the feet of  one of the family members beds. The Saturday night party goers has either called it quits or has passed out. However one individual was braving the cold with a thin jumper and a cam-corder in one had. They had business to attend to that had waited to long already. They focused on there target a grand  double story house that most of the members of Ricker Valley couldn't afford with even the grandest pay rise. The switched on there camera and the world was filled with the glowed green of  night vision. They crossed the road and proceeded to the front door with a click it swung open and the figure held the item in there other hand more menacingly,hearing the tap was running they stealthy  walked into the kitchen where there target was having one last drink . “ What are you doing here?” the old man questioned  the figures presence,who held up there weapon . “You can have as much money as you want …. just -” The figure rushed forward FLASH BANG . The man fell dead. “Hank !? You OK!?'”Melissa Thorne  rubbed her tired eyes hearing the loud sound and was concerned about her father. She took one look at the dark figure that was over her fathers body and began to run.

Melissa sat trembling  as she sat glued to her chair with fear and a piece of paper in her hands ..”Tonight I have began my work, Hank Thorne is dead , however I have no use for Melissa and she will be given to you shortly. But first I suggest to you my game. 16 photos of  members of Ricker Valley are being flashed  on your screen , I am one of them. I have also sent out 15 invites to people across the country ,they must try and figure out who I am or more importantly who I am not before I escape …. I would wish you good luck but ...you really don't have a chance.

Comments

Oeeeh, nice story!
Sent by Punanidibri,May 9, 2009
Thanks.
Sent by Kizza,May 9, 2009
Nice!
Sent by Danny7,May 9, 2009
+7 :D
Sent by sam_cutie567,May 9, 2009
Cool :)
Sent by xAdam93x,May 9, 2009

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