Recurring Characters- macda27 as Jeff Davison macda27 as Flo Parkers macda27 as Detective Samuels
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Episode Two: The Stab
Jenni's eyes opened.She was staring at the wall and had a massive hangover."Arrghh fuck my head!" Jenni said and stood up and walked downstairs and drank a glass of water.She headed back upstairs and saw something sticking out of under her pillow.She picked it up and it read "I love you Jenni"."This girl is tired right now" Jenni said and screwed up the note to a ball.Jenni walked back downstairs and into the kitchen.Ching-Ming was making bacon and eggs for breakfast.Jenni held up the note."Do you no who did this?" Jenni asked politely.Ching-Ming shook her head."N-no Jenni" Ching-Ming said."Ok,thanks CM!" Jenni said smiled.Jenni helped Ching-Ming make breakfast.Although Ching-Ming gets paid way more than he should,Jenni knew working in a large house 24/7 that fun and Jenni cared about others.Dale walked into the kitchen."Hey CM,hey sweetie" Dale said and planted a kiss on Jenni."Ew sad,no" Jenni said."Okay,sorry for showing kindness then!" Dale said and raised his hands in surrender.Jenni grabbed a plate of cooked bacon and eggs and walked up to her room.
Jenni sat on her bed and texted her friends Ella and Jaseyda if they knew about the note.Both replied "No sorry,Alex doesn't know either" and "GURL ain't no bitch got TIME for that".Then there was knocking on the window,but no one there."What the hell? Is that a pest?" Jenni asked and walked over to the window.Suddenly Hunter appeared at the window and Jenni jumped up in fright."What the hell Hunter,you almost gave me a heart attack!"Jenni said and opened the window.As he was climbing through,she put two and two together."Hunter,did you send me this?" Jenni asked."ugh...yeah" Hunter said,ashamed."Why are you so Freddy Kruger creepy Hunter.Ive said I don't like you a thousand times already,so could you leave?" Jenni asked rudely."I know you hate me,but I'm trying to warn you.I saw some guy with a weird mask following you home!" Hunter warned."Was he cute?" Jenni asked."Not funny,I can't stand the thought of losing you Jenni,please.Be careful" Hunter said and climbed out of the window and jumped down and walked off."Ugh,he didn't say if he had abs or not" Jenni said and sat down to eat her breakfast.
Jaseyda crashed at Ella's house for the night.For once,Alex wasn't up all night playing video games.Thought Alex is quite athletic.It was around lunchtime."Ok,who's hotter? Jeff or Jacob?" Jaseyda asked."Um I can't really have any of them.Jeff is with Flo and you have Jacob" Ella said."Ugh fine,then if they were both single,who would you date?" Jaseyda asked and grabbed a handful of popcorn."Uh,I guess Jeff.His face isn't as cute as Jacob's but his chest I could drool on" Ella said and Jaseyda gave her the scariest death look ever."What? I'm being honest!" Ella said in defence.Alex knocks on her door."I'm bored Ella,wanna talk or something?" Alex said."No Alex,I say this almost every day,I don't wanna talk with my brother,go away!" Ella yelled.Ella and Jaseyda heard footsteps getting fainter,meaning he was walking away."GURL ya brother is just tryna' be nice,he has no friends,cut the boy some slack!" Jaseyda said."When did you start taking his side?" Ella snapped."Whenever your on your period 'cause no bitch is moodier than you are when you piss blood once'a month!" Jaseyda said."Thanks,your a real pal" Ella said,being cross as fuck at Jaseyda.
"I gotta go gurl,Jacob and I are about to go to the park,how romantic is that!" Jaseyda said in a high pitch and Ella covered her ears."Ow that hurt! Be careful!" Ella said."Whatever hoe,gotta go" Jaseyda said and left.That was her catchphrase.Rude,just like Jaseyda.Jaseyda left the house and looked at her car and screamed in horror.The windscreen was covered in blood,but there were something someone has drawn in the blood with their finger:
2X 6WD
"What the fuck does THAT mean?" Jaseyda said and took a photo of it on her phone."Never heard of a 6 wheel drive!" Jaseyda said and used her handbag to wipe the blood off."I bet this was fucking Jenni,that's the only bitch that hates me" Jaseyda said in anger.Jaseyda drove to the park and saw Jacob sitting on a bench."Dayum,boo looks like he's a pedofile!" Jaseyda said and walked out of her car and walked to Jacob."Hey sexy thing!" Jaseyda said and hugged Jacob."I missed you baby,where were you last night?" Jaseyda asked."Oh I was watching some shows on Netflix.sorry I couldn't make it to the party.Im glad you had fun" Jacob said."Actually babe,I need to go to the toilet,could you give me a minute.Ill be right back" Jacob said and walked into the public toilets.One side for males and the other for females.
Jacob walked in and saw three stalls and three urinals.No one was at the urinals and no noise from the stalls.Emptiness of people.He walked up to a urinal and heard knocking from the far toilet stall.Jacob listened and stood there."Uh,hello?" Jacob asked.The knocking continued.Jacob started to walk to the stalls.He stood at the door.More knocking.From inside the stall.Jacob opened up the stall and saw no one.Then he turned and saw a costumed person with a hunting knife behind him."Holy shit!" Jacob yelled as Ghostface pushed Jacob into the stall and locked the stall door.Jacob fell on the seat and Ghostface plunged the knife into Jacob's chest before shoving his head into the toilet bowl.After Jacob struggling to breathe for 30 seconds,Jacob drowned while bleeding to death.
Jaseyda had waited five minutes for Jacob to come out of the bathroom."This bitch for real?" she asked and poked her head in the bathrooms.No noise at all."Did he ditch me?" she asked again.Jaseyda walked inside and into the middle of the room and spun around.No one was there.Then Jaseyda had one last thought.The stalls.
Detective Samuels stepped out onto the gravel carpark and walked up to the gates of Ella's high school which was now a crime scene.Samuels was greeted by a trainee cop."I don't see why they would do this,they look so happy together" the trainee cop said.Samuels and the Trainee walked into the gymnasium of the high school.From the rope that people climbed up from was the bodies of Flo Parkers and Jeff Davison.It was a single rope around two heads,something which looked physically impossible.Back to back.Heads facing one another.They proved Samuels wrong.A medical examiner removed the rope and lowered the bodies onto the ground carefully and removed the rope to reveal Jeff's neck had a huge slit in the middle while Flo already had a stomach wound."This isn't suicide.This is a double homicide" Detective Samuels announced.
Stall one and two were empty,but something didn't feel right of stall three,but she had to know if he is still on the toilet,or passed out or he just ditched Jaseyda.She opened the door and screamed to see Jacob in a pool of blood and his head in the bowl of the toilet.She saw no attacker.Jaseyda screamed as loud as possible and backed away from the horrific sight.With shaky hands,she pulled out her phone and dialled 911.
"Hello,what's your emergency?"
"Oh mah god....my boyfriend....he...he's dead!"
Episode Three:Fresh Cut
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Questions-
Thoughts on the episode?
Opinion of death scene?
Any killer predictions? Motive?
Favourite Characters?
Tips/Things I should improve on?
Anything you'd like to see in the series?
And what does the code mean?
Questions-
Thoughts on the episode? That is amazing to see that finally someone has noticed about the Ghostface
Opinion of death scene? Nothing special. Someone got to die right?
Any killer predictions? Motive? It is hard to predict as we don't know what the hunter aim for.
Favourite Characters? No one in this episode cause nothing has surprised me this episode
Tips/Things I should improve on? You have done a nice job so far!
Anything you'd like to see in the series? More clues that lead to the killer
Thoughts on the episode? Great
Opinion of death scene? Lovely
Any killer predictions? Motive? Nope
Favourite Characters? None atm
Tips/Things I should improve on? Nothing
Anything you'd like to see in the series? Same as wuau
And what does the code mean? I feel like x has something with Flo and Jeff's death
