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Episode Five: Pitch Black
"I can't see a thing!" Jaseyda said.Ella and Rob held hands."How could my son do such a horrible thing?" Rob asked."He's a sick hoe!" Jaseyda said.Suddenly a voice said "RUN!" and everyone screamed and ran in different directions.
"GURL I DON'T WANNA DIE SWEET JESUS SAVE MAH SOUL!" Jaseyda said and ran into Ella's room."Ah...ahh.....ah shit!" Jaseyda said,panicky.Suddenly a thought popped up in her head.She opened the curtains and window to make it look like she had jumped out of the window then hid under her bed."I don't wanna run outside,ain't nobody got time for that!" Jaseyda said and crossed her heart.
Rob and Jenni were in the basement."We can hide here!" Jenni said."No wait,a window!" Dale said."Um,I'm the only one that can fit through the window" Jenni said rudely.Dale chose to ignore her insult."Then go get help" Dale said."Wait,help me be hidden.Dale hid in between two mattresses and Jenni threw random junk on him covering any parts of her dad showing so he looked hidden from Alex."I think I'm good,go get help" Dale said.
Ella and Rob ran outside."We need to call the police!" Rob said."We have to get the neighbours to ring them for us,and quickly!" Ella said.Rob and Ella jogged to the sidewalk and Alex jumped out of the bushes."I never loved you dad,I was just invisible to you!" Alex said and slit Rob's throat in one slash.Rob fell on the ground instantly."OH MY GOD...DAD!" Ella said."Your turn...sister!" Alex said but Ella kicked him in the gut and ran back into the dark house.
Ella quickly ran inside with Alex behind her.She ran to the kitchen and grabbed a pan and waited behind a corner.But Alex could see her in the reflection of a cupboard window and walked quietly around the other side of the corner,and was right behind Ella."Fuck you" Alex said and grabbed Ella by the back of the neck.Ella gasped in surprise and spun around.She quickly smacked Alex in the knee with the pan and then in the back."WHY ALEX,HUH? WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?" Ella screamed."Because....I hate you,Ella.You have always had the good life.Ella has good friends.I have no friends.Ella gets what she wants.Im not even noticed.Well fuck you,I WANT TO BE THE BETTER SIBLING!" Alex shouted at Ella."Oh shut up" Ella said and brought the pan down on Alex's head and he fell on the kitchen floor."My brother...he's dead!" Ella said with mixed emotions,and went to go find Jaseyda in her room.
Ella opened her door,as it creaks slowly.She poked her head and saw the curtains gently moving to the light breeze and window wide open."Yass! Jaseyda got out alive,thank god!" Ella said and closed the door to find Alex in the kitchen.He was gone.
Suddenly an axe cut through the basement door which made Jenni scream."Go!" Dale whispered and Jenni opened the window.Alex opened the door and walked towards Jenni with the axe."OH NOOOO!" Jenni screamed and swung her legs over the ledge but suddenly Alex grabbed Jenni and pulled her off the ledge and she fell hard on the floor.Dale used this as an advantage and snuck to the door."I love you Jenn!" Dale said,crying.Alex just looked at Dale,then back at Jenni and brought the axe down hard on her stomach,almost cutting her in half,Dale's colour on his face drained as he saw Jenni's intestines spill onto the floor.He slammed the door hard and ran upstairs.
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Questions?
Thoughts on the episode?
Opinion on death scenes?
Favourite Character(s)?
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Any type of death you'd like to see in the next season? imprincearthur loopycoco1 turkeylover
Comments
Dale is a shame for a father. And Jaseyda is fave cuz Ain't nodody got time for that
Questions?
Thoughts on the episode? AMAZING
Opinion on death scenes? AMAZING
Favourite Character(s)? Jaseyda, for the love of god, SHE MAKES ME CRACK UP Denise 2.0 there!
Tips/Things I should improve on? Meh, try checking your work, I saw some errors, you called Ella a him
Any type of death you'd like to see in the next season? As long as its iconic, I can deal with it
OMFG AS MUCH AS HE IS MY CHARACTER I HATE HIM JENNI IS DEAD AND HE DID NOTHING FOR THE LOVE OF GOD KILL FUCKING DALE HE IS FAT IDGAF ABOUT HIM!
Thoughts on the episode? Really interesting..although Dale sucks as a dad
Opinion on death scenes? Robs was different but I think the explanation then him dying would be better...Jenni had it coming even though I love her
Favourite Character(s)? Alex, Ella and the Dead Jenni
Tips/Things I should improve on? Nothing
Any type of death you'd like to see in the next season? Idk
