Recurring Cast: Clementine117 as Detective Cynthia Penn
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Episode: "He's Inside"
Christmas Eve, 2000:
Everyone is spread throughout the kitchen & living room in silence pacing back and forth. "What the hell are we going to do guys? Just wait for him to get inside and kill us 1 by 1?" Chris asks. A bang is heard from upstairs. "......I think he's already inside....." Oriana says with fear. "Everyone be quiet!" Aria says as they all run to the kitchen & hide. "We have to find Noel." Vivienne says. "It's too late. Didn't you hear him scream? He's already dead." Alpha cries. They hear footsteps walking down the stairs and everyone tries not to make a sound. "He's going to kill us all." Lucy cries. "Shhhhhh! Nobody else is dying tonight." Damien says. The footsteps stop for a second and heard heading back upstairs. Vivienne who's sitting next to the door, peaks her head out and sees a pink envelope laying in the middle of the floor. "There's an envelope sitting there. I'm going to see what it is.". "You've got to be crazy, Vivienne! This is some 'I Know What You did Last Summer' shit!" Carmel whispers. Vivienne stands up and tip toes her way to the envelope whilst everyone peaks their head out to watch her. She quickly snatches it and runs against wall. She opens it up and takes out a card with the words "Merry Christmas" on the front. She opens up the card and reads "You've always seemed like the brave one, Vivienne." she drops the card in shock. "Vivienne, hurry!" Lucy whispers. The killer barges into the kitchen from the other door. Everyone screams & heads out into the living room. "VIVIENNE! RUN!" Chris says pulling her up. She sees the killer face to face "Shit." she says. They all spread out throughout the house. Carmel, Alpha & Damien head to the other side of the house of the first floor. Oriana, Robert, Chris, Vivienne & Max head down to the basement. Zach, Aria, Jade & Beth head to the third floor & Lucy is on her own hiding in a cabinet by the living room. Lucy hears the killer a few feet from her as he stops. She shakes and tries not to make a sound. The killer continues to walk and is heard doing something. He plays "White Christmas" as loud as possible on the record player. Zach begins piling up all the furniture against the door as Aria, Jade & Beth just stands there in the dark room. "There, he won't be able to get in." he says.
Carmel, Alpha & Damien are hiding in Aria's uncles office. They lock the door & wait there as Damien sees an open diary & reads the page it's opened to:
"December 20th, 2000- Today is 5 years since the death of Noel & Lawson's mother. I still have that day clear in my head. I was on my way to the market where I seen two precious boys sitting on the side of the street. I went to greet myself & the young man said his name was Noel. Noel ran away from an abusive home with his baby brother, not far from their house. I took them out to a park and bought all kinds of food for them. We sat and he said the only way he makes him money is by prostitution. I could not believe it because he seemed so kind and someone you just couldn't see having to do something like that. I had an immediate connection with them. Whilst we were chatting, their mother spotted us. She seemed very drunk as she ran over, grabbed Lawson out of Noel's hands and ran off with him. We chased her as she ran through an alleyway. Noel found her hiding behind a trash can. She dropped Lawson on the concrete from stumbling around. Noel was very angry and pushed her as she hit her head on the brick wall which instantly killed her. We both panicked and I felt like I needed to protect him. I drove my car around to the alley, we stuck her in my trunk and buried her out in the fields behind my house. After that we never spoke of her again. They now live down in my guest house where they seem very happy and at home. I love those boys like they are my own, I really do.
-Fred Kaneliss"
Damien sits there surprised while reading the entry. "Psst, Carmel! Why don't you peak out the door and check." Alpha whispers. "Check for what?! There's a god damn killer in the house. What more do you NEED to KNOW?" Carmel says. "Everyone let's just sit here and shut up." Damien demands. Alpha cuddles up to him as they sit there in silence. In the basement, Oriana, Robert, Chris, Vivienne & Max hear something heading towards them. "Shh. Shhh. It's alright." Robert says to Oriana as she shakes. The grandfather clock in the basement chimes at 12:00am as Max is startled & accidentally bumps the table he's hiding under and a glass breaks on the floor making everyone scream. The basement door gets kicked open and everyone panics. They all run out of their hiding spots as they try to find another door in the basement. They hit a dead end. The killer corners them against a brick wall. Robert grabs a metal can he finds next to him and slams the killer in the head with it. They all run away except for Oriana. The killer grabs her and slams her against the wall. "Oriana!" Vivienne yells. "We have to go!" Max tells her pulling her away. Oriana cries as she's being thrown around. The killer slams her face first on the cold stone floor, knocking 4 teeth out. The killer forces her head down with his heavy boot. "Please, I'll do anything, just let me go!" Oriana begs with tears pouring down her cheeks. The killer slowly puts more and more pressure on her neck making it hard for her to breathe. Finally the killer picks up his foot and stomps on her neck 5 times killing her.
Robert, Chris, Vivienne & Max run up the stairs yelling for help. "We have to go help them!" Beth says hearing the others close by. "If you want to get yourself killed then go right ahead!" Zach says. "Look like I'll have to be the man of the group." Beth replies hopping over the desks and opens the door slightly to see if anyone is nearby. Zach hesitates but says "I'm coming with you. I'm not letting anyone go out there alone. Aria & Jade, if you hear three knocks, thats us okay?" Zach says. They make their way out as Aria & Jade block up the door & hold each other. Zach & Beth walk down the hall looking every which way. Zach turns his head & BAM!, Lucy runs right into him. "Lucy, you alright?!" Zach asks. "Where the hell is everybody?!" she weeps. "Come with us." Zach says. Aria & Jade sit there as they hear footsteps running to the door "Knock, Knock, Knock!" they hear dramatically. Aria & Jade quickly move all of the furniture to let them in. Aria opens the door. A machete is impaled right through her chest as the blood splatters all over Jade's face. "JADE, ARIA!" Zach yells running towards Jade's scream. The killer pulls out the machete & runs off. Seconds later, Zach, Beth & Lucy return to Aria's body on the ground & Jade wrapped like a ball rocking back and forth against the wall. "Sh...sh...She's dead." Jade cries to Lucy & Beth as they comfort her. Zach pushes the furniture up against the door as they all stare at Aria. Zach takes off his coat and places it over her body.
Christmas Day, 2000:
Officer Sicamora heads into the evidence room just as the killer X's out Aria's picture on the Christmas Feast board "You found anything, Detective Penn?" he asks. Cynthia shakes her head "It's either a psycho who's doing this for fun or there's a big picture to it all & right now I have a gut feeling there's something big I'm missing. I looked through every victims files & it's crazy because they all seem like such nice people that don't seem to have any enemies. The only problem was Zach Poyo. Zach is a recovering alcoholic. Maybe he might of made someone mad while he was in his alcoholic state or something. Maybe one of them is hiding something from the rest of the group or maybe it's just some random killer wanting to get off to this. I don't know, it's just all really frustrating because I can feel the answers to all of this on the tip of my tongue. What I do know is that this killer has been planning the whole thing out for what seems like months, maybe even years.". "Well, keep doing what you're doing. You're good at your job, I know you'll figure something out. The survivors will be here any second now so I'll return in a bit." Officer Sicamora says and walks out.
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Next Episode:
"Light Up the Night"
What do you think of the episode?:
What did you think of Fred Kaneliss' diary entry?:
How do you feel about Oriana & Aria's deaths?:
Any other comments/opinions/theories?:
What do you think of the episode?:Excellent
What did you think of Fred Kaneliss' diary entry?:Sad
How do you feel about Oriana & Aria's deaths?:Did not really like them
Any other comments/opinions/theories?:KEEP UP GOOD WORK!!!!
What do you think of the episode?: I loved it, Loving the the depth of this mystery.
What did you think of Fred Kaneliss' diary entry?: Weird, I wonder why some were hesitant to read it.
How do you feel about Oriana & Aria's deaths?: Sad, I wished Aria was around longer.
Any other comments/opinions/theories?: Uhm, I defiantly think its some revenge plot by one of the people in the house.
What do you think of the episode?: it's getting much more intense
What did you think of Fred Kaneliss' diary entry?: it's shocking
How do you feel about Oriana & Aria's deaths?: so sad about arias death, I had a feeling she could have something to do with the murders since she knew the house but i think she died way too soon!
Any other comments/opinions/theories?: I think zach plays a big role in this story and I'm excited to find out what it is!
What do you think of the episode?: fantastic
What did you think of Fred Kaneliss' diary entry?: it was interesting and i think it will affect the story more than one would usually think
How do you feel about Oriana & Aria's deaths?: surprising, I thought only one person was going to die, and I thought it was a guy
Any other comments/opinions/theories?: To me, I think Damien and Alpha are a little fishy. We only saw them in the garage, but we didn't hear from either of them after that. So I think it could be an outside person and either Damien or Alpha.
What do you think of the episode?: I loved it! It answered SOME questions :p
What did you think of Fred Kaneliss' diary entry?: OMG! I was shocked! But it's nice to know where Noel comes from, and why he's related to all of this.
How do you feel about Oriana & Aria's deaths?: :( They were sad, I couldn't help but feel sorry for Oriana since she got the shot end of the stick, and Aria's just came out of nowhere! That was crazy!
Any other comments/opinions/theories?: Dude! This is legit amazing! And I just hope Noel isn't really dead. But my theory is that they were all hired to kill certain people by someone, so they each have 1 person to kill, and they were told that they'd be paid a certain amount of money for it.
its getting really fucking gory like oh my! after that diary entry i dont think noel's dead..maybe hes in on it for revenge? i had to wince at orianas death cause it was so explicit and gross, it took me like 10 seconds to realize that aria legit died and i was like OH SHIT.. 2 in 1 episode..i deffs think its a more than one person killer, cause some characters arent around when the killer is always
What do you think of the episode?: It was a really eye opening episode
What did you think of Fred Kaneliss' diary entry?: I don't know. It is interesting to know the boy's background. I'm thinking maybe the mother didn't die and she is plotting her revenge?
How do you feel about Oriana & Aria's deaths?: Oriana's was sad and Aria's was weird. I was hoping she wouldn't have died but oh welll
Any other comments/opinions/theories?: The only thing I can think of is that the mother is the killer
What do you think of the episode?: It was really good and I honestly was surprised with the outcome (and I'm loving all the movie references!!)
What did you think of Fred Kaneliss' diary entry?: I liked that because it's something that I feel like you'd actually see in a series and yeah c:
How do you feel about Oriana & Aria's deaths?: :/ I actually liked them.
Any other comments/opinions/theories? With the movie references, if there's a next season I think it'll have something to do with film.. potentially?
What did you think of Fred Kaneliss' diary entry?:Sad
How do you feel about Oriana & Aria's deaths?:Did not really like them
Any other comments/opinions/theories?:KEEP UP GOOD WORK!!!!