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Nov 26, 2014 by Loopulle
Etienne

J'ai un secret pour tout savoir: (8)
Je suis vachement une vache. (6)
Dans la ferme je savais qu'il a (8)
Dit « j'aime pas quand tu caches ». (6)

Lors ils ne m’aimaient pas pour moi, (8)
Mais m’aimais pour mon lait. (6)
J’étais abusée et privée, (8)
Je voulais être forte. (6)

Puis j’ai formé un plan mortel (8)
Pour échapper la ferme. (6)
J’ai tué le fermier, oui (8)
Plus tard, je suis partie. (6)

English:

I have a secret for all to know:
I'm really (or actually) a cow.
In the farm I knew that he
Said "I hate when you hide."

So they didn't like me for me
But liked me for my milk.
I was abused and deprived.
I wanted to be strong.

Then, I had a deadly plan
For escaping the farm.
I killed the farmer, yes
And later, I left.

Comments

Of Course this is for Etienne
Sent by yoshicoolman,Nov 26, 2014
What are the numbers for?
Sent by Etienne,Nov 26, 2014
Syllable count, Etienne. It's a ballad. :)
Sent by Loopulle,Nov 26, 2014
The grammar is a bit sloppy and there are a few mistakes but overall it's not bad. Loopulle
Sent by Etienne,Nov 26, 2014
Point 'em out, Etienne? :D
Sent by Loopulle,Nov 26, 2014
Point 'em out, Etienne? :D
Sent by Loopulle,Nov 26, 2014
Loopulle Can you post the original/English version too? It would be easier so I know more clearly what you're trying to say in some of the lines.
Sent by Etienne,Nov 26, 2014
Done, Etienne.
Sent by Loopulle,Nov 26, 2014
I actually originally made this as a comedic thing but it turned about to be a quiet serious. :P
Sent by Loopulle,Nov 26, 2014
J'ai un secret pour tous à savoir:
Je suis vraiment une vache.
Dans la ferme je sais qu'il a
Dit « je déteste quand tu te caches ».

Donc ils ne m’aimaient pas pour moi
Mais m’aimaient pour mon lait.
J’étais abusée et privée,
Je voulais être forte.

Puis j’ai formé un plan mortel
Pour échapper la ferme.
J’ai tué le fermier, oui
Et plus tard, je suis partie.

Loopulle
Sent by Etienne,Nov 27, 2014
Does vachement not work, Etienne? It sounds funnier and makes it funny at the start but more serious later on.

Thanks! :)
Sent by Loopulle,Nov 27, 2014
Loopulle You can put it if you want but it doesn't grammatically make sense. :P
Sent by Etienne,Nov 27, 2014

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