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Big Brother and online Hunger games.

One Little Mistake, written by Charlene Fitzgerald (me)

Nov 19, 2008 by Rogue
imageMost of lifes spent dreaming,
And dwelling on the past,
The presents being wasted,
because the years go by so fast,
some moments need to be remembered,
they'll someday make you smile,
keep the memories forever,
of how it was worth your while,
When that time is up,
nothing can change,
that unbearable intense pain,
nothing is worth suffering that way,
when what you had has been washed away,
One little mistake could change lives,
and cause more hurt than a thousand knives,
So stop dreaming and enjoy it today,
cos one little mistake could take it all away

Comments

Whoever negs someones creative outlet is obviously a douchebag.
Anyway, this is really good :) I've been writing a lot lately, and my stuff probably isn't as good as this.
I'd post it but I'm afraid it'd get stolen or w/e, ya know?
Sent by PopBelly,Nov 19, 2008
Yehh thats happened me before. I was tempted to say "hey thats mine", but fought the urge!
You should put up one or two!
Sent by Rogue,Nov 19, 2008
Hmm... maybe. But probably one of my unfinished or worse ones, I'd rather have someone tell me its crap than steal something thats important to me.
Sent by PopBelly,Nov 19, 2008
Hmmm yeah thats a good point- constructive criticisms always good though- Can give you ideas on how to make a crap one good¬!
Sent by Rogue,Nov 20, 2008

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