So for a while, I’ve been trying to look for a new person’s blog series to assess, but the truth of the matter was that none of them were really good enough to get new assessments or the episodes came either way too fast or way too slow to really let me get my thoughts together. With Death Awakens, while some sentences could be edited (seriously, last episode where I read Lucia eating Lucia? lol) I see promise in the plot. It looks like it is going to be a really good series, so here is an Assessment to help motivate you to keep going forward.
Let us say goodbye to the person we lost in these first episodes.
In Memorium: https://youtu.be/_wSWMgNW4PU MelindaMrskk – Lucia Yaves – EPISODE 1 – EPISODE 3 – Cause of death: ripped apart by zombies This really sucks for a first death because I think Lucia really could have had a lot of potential. She will truly be missed.
Onto the living characters.
Iris Sinclair – EPISODE 1 or 3 – While we don’t know much about Iris, so far I approve of her. She really has a mysterious vibe going on with her and I feel like she will be a vital part to the group’s survival. I can’t wait to see how she develops
MrPokeguy9 – Chris Luna – EPISODE 2 – Chris’s backstory, I’m not gonna lie, is really sad, so I thought it was really big of him to open up his story to someone like Madison. Now do I think it’s gonna get him in any kind of bases with Madison? Hell no! But he certainly isn’t the worst character in the group of high school kids.
MrPokeguy9 – Daniel Misslebrook – EPISODE 2 – Last episode, we saw Daniel get pranked with a walker head on his bed. This kind of makes me think that Daniel is going to be the kind of character who always succumbs to his anger and lets it get the best of him. As far as his characters goes, there really isn’t much I can say about him at this point, but maybe as the story goes on, he will grow into me. Who knows? Rocketokid13 Sierra Quinn – EPISODE 1 – Oh boy! So, let’s just get this out in the clear now, Sierra is a raging bitch! Her whining throughout some of the episodes is just grating to read, and her bitchiness is gonna get people killed if she’s not careful. About the only person who she really shows her more sincere side is Holdyn, but to be honest, even that’s not enough to get her off the hook entirely. Best thing we can hope for in regards to Sierra is that she grows up and QUICK! Katherinee_ Madison Argent – EPISODE 1 – Madison, I have to say, is one tough cookie! Before she even got to the school, she fended off many zombies just to get there. HOWEVER, and this is a big one, in most zombie worlds, if Madison did anything as reckless as what she did, she would have been bit much too quickly. Her character seems pretty cool, and I will definitely be rooting for her to not flop in coming episodes. rippyroo Sue Clarke – EPISODE 1 – So my thing with Sue is that she isn’t a bad character, but she’s a bit protective of Sierra. I get it, she’s trying to keep the hotel group to stick together, but how she has handled it hasn’t really been the best. I do want to see if she survived the hotel fire though because that was a huge cliffhanger if I do say so myself. hints Tisha Mai – EPISODE 2 – This installment of Tisha might seem nice, but honestly, I don’t really care that much for her. She’s kind of just there, but I DO feel something big will come for her, and I feel like despite Madison’s intimate moment with Chris, Tisha will be the one Chris suckers into going to bed with him. tkoj555 - Buffy Grey – EPISDOE 2 – Have you ever done the Alien knife challenge?
Buffy really reminds me of Bishop when she is doing her knife patterns. Personality-wise, she might be the most interesting person of the whole school group. She seems like a psycho, but in a group of people that I probably don’t care that much for minus Madison, psycho might be what we need. _ivyyy_445 - Henry Jaxxon – EPISODE 1 – Henry seems to be more on a work ethics kind of mindset as you can see from calling Sierra out for not earning her share, but I do think he is a bit hard on Sierra. That being said, he is a pretty relatable character if you look at it from a frustrations point of view. How he develops is up in the air, but because of the fire, he could easily be dead. RyanAndrews - Parker Watson – EPISODE 2 – I don’t really care for him that much, and to be honest, he may be on borrowed time. Parker is so extra that he didn’t make a single appearance in Episode 3. Of course, Iris wasn’t introduced till Episode 3, but she was working alone. He wasn’t. My theory is that Daniel might have already killed Parker as we speak for the walker head. Aydanmac01 - Holdyn Maring – EPISODE 1 – So of the hotel group, Holdyn is really the one that is doing the best at keeping the group together. This is because is being relatable towards Sierra. However, outside the hotel, he seems pretty clueless and kind of meandering in a ways. Holdyn is not a bad character by any means, but he’s nowhere near a favorite that has risen in the cast.
I had actually meant to get this out earlier, but these last few days have been a perpetual headache that it was just so hard to keep up with writing. But hopefully my assessments for this series will get better as the season goes on because this is a series that is really showing proble. I do hope you’ve enjoyed reading this and I’ll see you when I see you.
Thank you so much for the assessment, I'm glad you've enjoyed the start to the series.
I am fully aware I need to remember to proof read my episodes before I release them, but sometimes I read through them and read it how it's meant to be read regardless so dot see the mistakes. All critiques I a, happily taking onboard and using to help make storylines better and story structures more easy to understand :)
I read all of the assessment and I agree with most of it! I honestly totally forgot that Parker even exist LMAO! These series have a LOT of potential and I already love them!
