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The Island Chapter 11:Escape from Abbiens Isle Part 1 Oct 1, 2018
Alison and Colby stand in front of the burning church. Colby puts his lighter back into his pocket.
Alison:How did you know it would burn?
Colby:It hasn't rained for days, the wood was going to be really dry...
Alison nods
Alison:Let's get out of here, they are going to see it soon..
Colby hurries through the brush and Alison quickly follows. They escape just in time as Father Jimenez approaches the Church from the back. He falls to his knees and he yells out as he watches it burn.
Father Jimenez:NO!!!!!! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!?

He pounds the ground with his fist over and over again until eventually his knuckles start to bleed, but he pays his hand no attention, he just keeps beating the ground in anger.

~END SCENE~

A large boat appears in Taylor's view and she recognizes it as a Coast Guard ship. She waves her arms again and she notices a light shining on her. Excitedly she jumps up and down
Taylor:Yes! Thank god I am saved!

~END SCENE~

Savanna looks up at the sky and she sighs.
Savanna:I need to calm down...
She sits down on the sand and she crosses her legs. She gets into a meditative state and she closes her eyes. She takes a few deep breaths as she tries to ease her mind from the past couple of hours. She hears footsteps approaching and she sighs.
Savanna:Do what you want, I don't care anymore..

Jean stands behind her with the rifle in hand.
Jean:Savanna? What happened?

Savanna shakes her head.
Savanna:Don't worry about it, just leave me alone...
Jean shuffles awkwardly before looking over and seeing Taewong's body. A few days ago he would have flipped out but now he is just used to seeing death.
Jean:How did it happen?
Savanna:I killed him...

Jean takes a step back.
Jean:What do you mean? You did this to him?
Savanna walks up to Jean and although he gets nervous he doesn't point his rifle at her. She pulls him in for a hug and he pats her back awkwardly as she lets her emotions out.
Savanna:I should've done more..
Jean:It's alright...

Savanna shakes her head
Savanna:No it's not. How do I live with myself?
Jean:We need to get off of this island, and we need to make sure they can never do this again...
Savanna nods and she retreats from the hug before wiping her eyes.
Savanna:I'm sorry, I am not weak I just...

Jean nods
Jean:I have to go find Imani and apologize.
Savanna looks at him curiously
Savanna:Just tell her

Jean's cheeks turn red for a moment.
Jean:Tell her what?
Savanna:After we get off of this Island, tell her how you feel about her. After we're all gone...
Jean reaches for his chest, forgetting that his camera is gone.
Jean:What are you going to do?
Savanna turns to the ocean
Savanna:Taylor and Mike left on a boat. I want to wait here in case they come back
Jean frowns, not sure if her plan will work but not wanting to call her out on it either. His frown quickly turns to a smile and he nods to her before leaving to find Imani.

~END SCENE~

Taylor gets helped aboard by one of the crew members. The man looks at Mike's body questionably and Taylor sighs.
Taylor:We had been out here for days. He said he wanted it rather than starve to death..
The man looks at Taylor accusingly but he just sighs.
Man:Well don't worry about it. I'm sorry you had to go through that.

Taylor nods before suddenly remembering her friends.
Taylor:We need to help my friends!
The ships' horn sounds again and the ship starts to take off. The man nods
Man:What happened?
Taylor:My friends are dying. We had to get away on the boat but there are still people there..
Man:Do you know where it was?
Taylor:Abbiens Isle?

The man nods and another man walks up to Taylor and he wraps a towel around here.
The first man smiles
Man:My name is Joseph by the way, but you can call me Joe..Usually we wouldn't take accusations seriously but we found you in the middle of nowhere.

He walks towards the bridge of the ship and Taylor watches the water.
Taylor:Please hurry...

~END SCENE~

Imani walks along the trail. She is hugging herself while she walks, knowing that any moment she could be dead. She trips over an overgrown branch and she yells out as she feels a crack in her leg. She drags herself off the trail and its not soon after that she sees Father Jimenez standing where she fell. He turns to face her and he starts walking towards her. Imani watches with fearful eyes as he pulls out a hunting knife.

She backs up against a tree and a flash of hope rushes through her when she sees the Man in the Tiki Mask walk up behind him. He has a thick strand of rope and he wraps it around the Father's neck before yanking him back. Imani does her best to crawl away, not wanting to stick around for the aftermath. As she is crawling, she is bewildered by the silence around her. She stops to look back just for a moment and she hears it. She hears 4 bullets ring through the air and a few seconds later Father Jimenez walks through the brush. Imani cries out for the only person she thinks can help her.

Imani:JEAN! JEAN HELP!

Tears start rolling down her cheeks and she becomes a mess as she realizes her fate. She hears him call out for her in the distance.
Jean:IMANI!

Father Jimenez shakes his head and he stabs Imani in the gut. He looks her in the eyes as he watches her gasp.
Father Jimenez:He isn't going to save you....

Father Jimenez pulls the blade out of Imani's abdomen and she falls to her side, just in time for Jean to come out through the brush with his rifle. The Man in the Tiki Mask comes up next to Jean and he takes his mask off. He holds the bloody fishhook in his hand and Father Jimenez starts to back up. Alison and Colby appear behind him, crossing their arms as they watch him panic. Father Jimenez pulls out his pistol once more

Father Jimenez:You don't want to do this! You don't want to upset the God!
Alison's glare intensifies as she locks her eyes on him.
Alison:It's too late, I am already pissed!

kaylabby Savanna Hart/The Sweetheart
bigdizzleyomama Jean Atkinson/The Wallflower
Katherinee_ as Alison Parker/The Bitch
Logie56 Colby Porter/The Sports Star
Indiybomboo Imani Jiang/The Romantic
Icarus_Mark Taylor Smoke/The Hoodlum

~Island Residents~
Father Jiménez(Manager)
Tiki Mask Murderer

~Dead~
dan12233445566 Dean Knight/The Player
TwoStep Cody Harper/The Hustler
Tattooed Woman(Lisbeth)
me2013 Amy Rivers/The Outcast
John
flamergamer8 Alex Herrera/The Heir
Hotel Clerk
varlto Ethan Collins/The Victim
lhooper902976 Hoop Dancer/The College Bro
CopperTribe Jack Shiny/The Prankster
Daniel(Bartender)
TR1364 Taewong Yi/The Best Friend
Wolven6974 Mike Vitscoff/The Quiet One

Comment if you want me to tag you as a spectator in future chapters as a reader.
~Readers~
Foxy_Piplup

~Questions~
The next chapter is the conclusion to the Story, how did you like it? Anything I can do better?(I am ok with constructive criticism. It is the only way I can get better)
Favorite Moment?
Least Favorite Moment?
Favorite Character(Besides Your Own)
Least Favorite Character(Besides Your Own)
Who you wish would've survived?
Excited for the Next Story?(I know I definitely am)
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Part 1 to the Finale Sep 30, 2018
I am SO SO sorry for the delay!

I am currently in the middle of a 7-day stretch of work so I haven't gotten as much done as I have wanted to over the course of the last few days

However, I am almost done(I need to do some edits and look it over to make sure I am satisfied with the chapter)

It should be posted late tomorrow night(9-10PM EST?)

kaylabby
bigdizzleyomama
TR1364
Katherinee_
Logie56
Indiybomboo
Icarus_Mark
@CopperTribe
Wolven6974
dan12233445566
TwoStep
me2013
varlto
lhooper902976
Foxy_Piplup
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Umm Sep 30, 2018
https://tengaged.com/blog/TaraG/8703630/i-could-make-blog

lol the past few months have discredited everything said in this blog, but you keep acting innocent(you already got banned for it so if you want to keep denying it more power to you)
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Is it bad Sep 30, 2018
That I degrade myself just so I can laugh? I mean im not sure if that falls under dark humor or if I actually need help
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Oh no..(Survivor Spoiler) Sep 26, 2018
I feel so bad for Pat. Medevacs are terrible and even worse when it happens before you can even play the game. I hope he gets a 2nd chance to play, even if he didn't leave much of an impression on me :/

Edit:Him saying "I don't want to quit" and crying when he realized he was being pulled broke my heart. Imagine getting to live out a dream and getting forcibly removed before you can even get to do anything.
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The Island Chapter 10:Choices Sep 26, 2018
(Sorry for the short Chapter ahead of time, I decided to let every choice in this Chapter be made by the cast themselves, so this is a 100% interactive chapter and the consequences of those choices).

Imani gets up and she starts to walk in the direction that Jean went. She keeps walking until she sees Jean sitting in the middle of a small clearing, still with a rifle in his hands. Imani lights up when she sees him.
Imani:Jean!
Jean immediately stands up and he points the rifle, still on edge a bit. He lowers It when he sees it's Imani and he sighs.
Jean:Yes?
Imani takes a deep breath before looking at Jean.
Imani:I have given it a lot of thought..and I choose to forgive you.
Jean looks at her with a perplexed look on his face.
Jean:Excuse me?
Imani:I-I forgive you..You wanted to kill the child and I understand..
Jean scoffs and he turns his back on Imani.
Jean:I did the right thing, that's why you should forgive me...

Jean takes the camera that is still wrapped around his neck and he tosses it onto the ground.
Jean:I did what I thought was right? I did what was going to save us. What if he killed one of us? What if he killed you?
Jean looks back at Imani and he shakes his head.
Jean:It doesn't matter how you looked at it, you chose the side of a murderer over one of your own friends.

With that, Jean once again leaves Imani alone, and once again Imani starts crying over the guilt of what she had done. She didn't care anymore if she died, she just didn't want to die alone.

~END SCENE~

Savanna hides in the water as she watches the group disappear from the beach. She rushes over to Taewong and she covers her mouth when she sees his body. One of his arms is missing and his face is no longer recognizable. Savanna feels herself getting angry at herself, but her anger begins to turn towards Taewong.
Savanna:WHY DID YOU HAVE TO FALL?

She kicks his lifeless corpse a few times before stumbling onto the ground. She does her best to cope with his death, but it has clearly started to affect her psyche.

~END SCENE~

Alison stands at the door and Colby sighs.
Colby:Alright, we can go. Where are you planning on going?
Alison looks over at Colby and she rolls her eyes.
Alison:Thanks for the vote of confidence...

Colby shakes his head and he walks up to her.
Colby:Alright, let's go...
Alison opens the door and she walks out of the bar with Colby following closely behind. They make their way to the church, and Alison walks up to the front door. She notices Colby isn't behind her to see Colby standing at the bottom of the steps.
Alison:Colby, come on!
Colby sighs and he mutters something under his breath before catching up to her.
Colby:What are we doing here?
Alison:We are going to burn this place to the ground...

~END SCENE~

Mike and Taylor are both laying in the boat. Mike's skin has started to become pale and his lips look cracked. Taylor is playing with her switchblade, just flipping it in her hand over and over again until she is startled by Mike.
Mike:Tay..lor..
Taylor looks over at him
Taylor:Hmm?
Mike does his best to sit up, although he doesn't move very much.
Mike:I can't die...not like this..please, kill me...
Taylor drops the knife and she shakes her head quickly.
Taylor:What? No no no I can't do that..I am not a killer..!
Mike goans out
Mike:Please! I don't want to starve to death..

Taylor looks at Mike and his pleading eyes finally convince her to pick up the knife.
Taylor:But what about me? I will be all alone...
Mike frowns
Mike:You're a survivalist, I am not....
Taylor crawls over next to Mike and she sighs

Taylor:Are you sure?
Mike nods slowly
Mike:Please....

Taylor pushes the blade into Mike's neck before slitting his throat. The gash cuts deep into him and blood spurts out of his neck. Mike groans in pain but he soon becomes lifeless. Taylor rests her head on Mike's chest and she starts to cry. She throws the switchblade into the water and her head yanks upwards as she hears a horn.
Taylor stands up in the boat and waves as she hears it again, only much closer.
Taylor:HELP! PLEASE HELP!!!

~END SCENE~

Colby:We are going to burn their church? So, what do we do then? We'll have pissed them off even more AND we still don't have a way off of the Island.
Alison:Well maybe a plane will see the fire overhead and try to help? John told me I need to burn the church
Colby raises an eyebrow.
Colby:John?
Alison:Long story...Now come on, we don't have much time...

kaylabby Savanna Hart/The Sweetheart
bigdizzleyomama Jean Atkinson/The Wallflower
Katherinee_ as Alison Parker/The Bitch
Logie56 Colby Porter/The Sports Star
Indiybomboo Imani Jiang/The Romantic
Icarus_Mark Taylor Smoke/The Hoodlum
Wolven6974 Mike Vitscoff/The Quiet One

~Island Residents~
Father Jiménez(Manager)
Tiki Mask Murderer

~Dead~
dan12233445566 Dean Knight/The Player
TwoStep Cody Harper/The Hustler
Tattooed Woman(Lisbeth)
me2013 Amy Rivers/The Outcast
John
flamergamer8 Alex Herrera/The Heir
Hotel Clerk
varlto Ethan Collins/The Victim
lhooper902976 Hoop Dancer/The College Bro
CopperTribe Jack Shiny/The Prankster
Daniel(Bartender)
TR1364 Taewong Yi/The Best Friend

Comment if you want me to tag you as a spectator in future chapters as a reader.
~Readers~
Foxy_Piplup

Chapters 11 and 12 are 2 parts to a finale, so I hope you know what that means

~Questions~
10 episodes and 13 deaths later, how does it feel that the finale is next?
Who are you surprised to see still alive?
Who are you surprised to see dead?
Saddest death?
Most deserving death?
Favorite death?(Which death scene did you enjoy the most)

Again, I am so sorry for the short chapter. Part 11 may take a few days, as I do have a LOT planned for it, hopefully it will make up for such a short chapter 10(although this chapter's contents were the results of the choices I gave you all yesterday)
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