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Last week CaitlinBella was the highest scoring writer. Will the same thing happen, or will a new writer be the stand out novel! ( love what I did there haha )

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Starting with... our newbie, KathrineOliver

KathrineOliver:

Creativeness: 8/10: I started to read your story at my computer and by the end I was on the edge of my seat, happy that emotion was added in this wonderful piece of writing. For the first time this season I wish I let your write a novel as this was a great read. A few things seemed familiar to other stories, but you changed it and I can’t wait to see what you can write in the future.

Understandable: 8/10: Now, this may seem a little mean as I knew what was going on. It was the many names that confused me in parts. Names of aliens and again, a litle few mistakes added ( tiny ones but I have to point them out. ) Other than that, well done.

Originality: 8/10: It’s a war in space. It has been done but not always to this level. I love that you didn’t hold back on the tension, added some disturbing description really worked. Well done.

Overall: 8.5/10: I should give you a 8 as that’s what you scored the last 3 factors. But I have to score you more as you done something that many failed to do this week. You added emotion. You gave me a world and characters to care about. Two people I stick with throughout the whole story. If this is only challenge 2, then I can’t wait till the future.

32.5/40

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Next... Connor_

Connor_:

Creativeness: 5/10: I struggled with this one. I see what you were trying to do, put a laid back spin on Sci-Fi. Maybe it could of worked, if there was more build up and a little longer. Maybe it wasn’t my cup of tea. I really get your style, but I think you haven’t found that it factor yet.

Understandable: 7/10: Again it’s the mistakes that let you down. It makes me stop and work it out, rather than letting me sit back and enjoy the story. Also it seemed a little too laid back. Why wasn’t he panicking. You have to put emotions into the story. If I couldn’t move and my friends were in the same problem, then I wouldn’t say ‘guess that my fear maybe wasn't so irrational after all’

Originality: 5.5/10: It’s something I’ve read, watched, seen before. Not saying it was bad, just needed a little more added. I’m sorry.

Overall: 5/10: I wanted to like it, I tried to like it and I did like it. But after reading some of the other stories this one fell flat compared to others. It needed more emotion, more grit. Give me something to care about! You posted your story on time so you lose no points.

22.5/40