PATRICK'S CRITIQUES:
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Natalie Smith – I like this picture, it’s simple and explanatory, yet it almost has a darker, mysterious tone about it, it almost depicts more of an affair than a committed relationship, and I find it quite intriguing. I like the outfits, and even the black and white I find helps here more than it’s hindered others in the past. Well done!
Wendy Wu – With the way the bodies are positioned and the play of the light/dark colors between you both, I’m almost getting sort of a Yin and Yang kind of vibe. However, that’s solely in the bodies, and not very much in you two attempting to model. I really appreciate the direction you were taking this and think you could have knocked it out of the park with just a bit more, but for me, this just doesn’t nail it the way you could have.
Malaysia Renee-Young – The things about this that I like far outweigh any criticisms I may have for you. I love your strong pose, and your outfit with your gloves, and I like how he is modeled as well. I definitely buy the story of this being your “rich husband and [you]”, as he seems to be the one that is more outfront, which brings me to my only minor criticism, in that he seems to be almost overshadowing you here, which isn’t something that you want in a competition where you’re trying to win. Overall, fantastic photo.
Shanna Brown – At first while reading your description of the relationship prior to viewing the picture, I was apprehensive and nervous about what you were going to deliver, but wow, this is wonderful. The strong pose in the male model, but after hearing your story, he’s placed strategically as to be seen as an afterthought to everything you’re serving up here, and it’s beautiful. I have no complaints this week, everything is perfect.
Brendina Reedera – I appreciate this photo a lot. I see a couple where he is looking at her longingly but she’s looking outward, which I feel fits your description of you being the star in this relationship. I love her outfit and her hair, love the touch of the glasses in the hand. Maybe the black and white took away a little bit overall, but it’s still a great photo.
Ximena Rodriguez – This is one of your weaker photos for me. I don’t really see “eternal love”, definitely more like “lust”. To me, your look isn’t your best here, and you seem to be more in his shadow (literally and figuratively). I know you can bring more than this, I hope we get that opportunity next week.